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------------------------------------------------ Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

"In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows."

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise?

A. It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.
B. It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.
C. It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.
D. It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer :

the fact i kept geting an 80% because of you guys is shameful. for others who are looking for the right and correct answer, its "It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness." just shameful

The statement which best describes how the
sentence provided above can be made more concise is:



It has a redundant pair that may be revised to
eliminate repetitiveness.


The use of the pair “go and seek” is
subject for revision.