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How could this sentence be rewritten to maintain a formal tone?

Kids should really study foreign language to learn about lots of cultures.

A. Kids you know you want to sign up to learn a new language and culture!
B. Students should take a bunch of classes that allow them to learn new cultures.
C. Students should study foreign language to be exposed to new cultures.

Answer :

the fourth one (“students should study foreign languages to be exposed to new cultures”)!!! it sounds professional. phrases/words like “kids” and “a bunch” and “lots” do not

Answer:

Students should study foreign language to be exposed to new cultures.

Explanation:

this sentence refrains from colloquial language. this makes it sound more formal than "kids," "really," and "a lot/lots."

it also uses a third person point of view which is more formal than first and second person.

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