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Circle the correct answer. Check only one.

Read these sentences:

"The crescent moon was beautiful. Its luminous glow lit the sky."

Which revision combines the sentences most effectively?

A. The crescent moon was beautiful as its luminous glow lit the sky.
B. The crescent moon as its luminous glow lit the sky was beautiful.
C. The crescent moon as it lit the sky was beautiful with its luminous glow.
D. The crescent moon, and its luminous glow, were beautiful, and lit the sky.

Answer :

Answer:

A.) The crescent moon was beautiful as its luminous glow lit the sky.

Explanation:

A is the best answer because it makes the most sense and it was written the simplest.

B is incorrect because it would need commas enclosing "as its luminous glow lit the sky" to make sense.

C is incorrect because it would need commas enclosing "as it lit the sky".

D is incorrect because it has too many unnecessary commas.

The revision that combines the sentences most effectively is this: A. The crescent moon was beautiful as its luminous glow lit the sky.

What is the best revision?

The first revision that summarizes the sentences is option A. This option connects the sentences by showing why the crescent moon was described as being beautiful.

There the author says that the luminous glow from the crescent moon lit the sky and added to its beauty. We can coin sentences by showing how they are related with the aid of conjunctions.

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